My free writing

Once upon a time there lived a girl and she travelled up a hill to get a pail of 
water. When the girl came down with the water the girl tripped and broke his crown and couldn't get up in the morning.

My shape moster

L.I Can I use nouns, verbs and adjectives correctly in my writing?

My shape monster name is Clob.  Clob is a bad monster because she destroys buildings. Clob has a yellow square body.  Her eye is a circle and the colour is black. Clob's mouth looks like a oval. 

Clob has 2 triangle arms and the colour is blue. Clob's favourite thing to do is to eat things out of my cupboard.

Remembering summer poem

This week I have learnt to use verbs and adjectives to make my writing interesting
On a frozen winter day,
My feet remember getting burnt on the sand, 
my legs remember getting wet in the cold water, 
my body remembers being dumped by a big wave,
my arms remember doing handstands on the beach,
my hands remember picking up pretty shells,
my face remembers getting water splashed on it,
my mind remembers that summer will be back again soon.