My rhino story

We have been using animal pictures for writing motivation. I wrote about Rhino's at a waterhole.

One night Cruz was asleep and I woke him up because I was thirsty. We went to the waterhole I saw a cameraman. He took a photo of us and me and Cruz charged at the cameraman. He ran away screaming. It was hysterical. Then I got a drink from the water hole but I slipped into the water hole it was freezing. Cruz helped me up with his horn. Then I went home to look at the glittering and sparkling stars.

Free Writing - Ice Cream World

This is a story from my free writing book.

If my house was made out of ice cream me and my brother would eat it all up. If the wold was made out of ice cream I would eat the whole world up. If the sun was made out of ice cream I would fly to the sun and eat it up too.

My free writing

Once upon a time there lived a girl and she travelled up a hill to get a pail of 
water. When the girl came down with the water the girl tripped and broke his crown and couldn't get up in the morning.